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Wednesday, 30 June 2010

On Going by Owen Sheers

It’s been a slow news day here at the GFG luxury penthouse suite in Thanatology Towers. So here’s a very good poem by Owen Sheers. If you like it, buy the collection. It’s called Skirrid Hill and it’s published by seren.

On Going

i. m. Jean Sheers

There were instruments, as there always are,

To measure, record and monitor,

windows into the soul’s temperature.

But you were disconnected from these.

and lay instead an ancient child,

fragile on your side,

your breath working at the skin of your cheek

like a blustery wind at a blind.

There was only one measurement

I needed anyway, which you gave,

triggered by the connection of my kiss

against your paper temple

and registered in the flicker of your open eyes,

in their half-second of recorded understanding

before they disengaged and you slipped back

into the sleep of their slow-closing.

Categories: funeral poetry

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  1. Thursday 1st July 2010 at 1:02 pm
    Claire Callender said...

    made me cry

  2. Friday 15th October 2010 at 1:03 pm
    Amber Thomas said...

    dont really understand the poem…

  3. Friday 15th October 2010 at 1:05 pm
    Amber Thomas said...

    Can someone give me a brief explination please?

  4. Friday 15th October 2010 at 8:36 pm
    charles said...

    Hello, Amber. The poem is i. m. – in memoriam. It is in memory of Jean Sheers – the poet’s mother, perhaps. She has been disconnected from her monitoring machines and is lying in a foetal position, dying. Even though she is very close to death, she nevertheless recognises the poet, albeit it only momentarily. This is important to him. It is a sad poem, of course, and very stark, yet full of love and sadness and honesty.

    I hope this helps.

  5. Saturday 16th October 2010 at 6:41 pm
    Amber thomas said...

    thankyou charles, this was very helpful :)

  6. Monday 18th October 2010 at 11:05 am
    charles said...

    A pleasure, Amber.

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